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Comission - Brouge4ever

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This is a comission for :iconbrouge4ever: for his brother.

First time I do a fish/shark character.

Hope you like it!

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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

I really love the style you did this with. so I'm gonna do a critique, as this being my very first one. anyways i really like the way you did the shadowing. like the shadow of the surfboard, just perfect. you also make it very possible to see where the light source is coming from. another thing i liked very much about this is the muslce definition and details. Not too much, and also not too little.

Aaaand here's the bad part, sorry :/ so its about the coloring. sometimes a little mistake with coloring can ruin the whole picture, (but im not saying this picture is ruined) some of it runs outside of the outline, making it look fuzzy. so you might want to focus on being a little bit cleaner next time. also your coloring on some parts seem to be just a solid one color. so mixing colors might help out.