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Sketch Dump - redesign librarian cat and dragoness by davi-escorsin Sketch Dump - redesign librarian cat and dragoness by davi-escorsin
So, since I'm restarting the story, I'm redesinging the characters. These are not their final designs, but I want something close to this.

The librarian cat will be black from now on, or at leas a dark volor, and he'll be a littl more athletical.

About dragoness. I had to take her wings off because those things would not help the indoors scenes.

And I decided to make her more mammal like, And, yes, she has boobies .

YOU HAPPY NOW????

And of course the'll have real names. I just haven't thought about them yet...

Well, hope you like this!

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MysteriousFeathers Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
these two characters look amazing!
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luigiix Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Hey, great stuff!
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yugijak Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You know, I really like these designs. Plus, they fit the characters in personality as well. I mean the Librarian cat, Alreya isn't it, is a kind of darker character, whereas the dragon does have a lighter personality.

And while I am sad to say I agree with the decision to crop the wings, you don't have to remove them completely. Giving her the ability to summon them when she needs to get some extra air or speed is cool, and adds to the mystery and mystical elements of her character.

I have a suggestion for names.

The dragon girl is Kendra, which sounds like a dragon name, and the cat is Ben, which I thought fit his job as a librarian.

Just some ideas I thought you could put to use.
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davi-escorsin Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Hey, man, I think you were too late. I already have a name for them both, and the idea of the wings doesn't fit the new story. BTW, he's Alexei and she's Aerys.
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yugijak Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well better late than never.

However you could still use my idea so you can keep her wings. I'd love to see something like that.

When will the new comic be out?
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davi-escorsin Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I'm not sure. I'm working on it. I want to have a certain number of pages done before I start posting them.

But the idea of the wings is off, completely. It doesn't fit in the story, and it wouldn't hel in anything.
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yugijak Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well...

Nope, no, not going to debate it, this is your story!

Personally I can't wait to see the new story. How many pages are you going to try and have before putting them up? And is that for some time to come up with more?

I like your characters, and I'm curious if your dragon one, Aerys I think, gets any special powers for, y'know, being a dragon. Does she?
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davi-escorsin Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Man, I'm gonna ruin your expectations...

The story is gonna have a more realistic approach. There's not gonna be any "magic" in it. The "dragon" species is named that way just because they resemble mythology dragons.
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yugijak Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That doesn't ruin them...that only alters them.

I bet you have some really cool stuff planned. I'm sure it will be epic.

So why did you start this comic series? Why are you writing it?
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davi-escorsin Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I started making the first comic, with the "librarian cat" and the "dragoness" as a test. Once I noticed it made a relatively big success, I started developing it, and I realized I had to remake it.

Once things started to get a more serious, I remade the characters, and the whole story. In fact, I wrote a story. The first comic didn't have one.
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